26 Aralık 2011 Pazartesi

my vıdeo reflectıon * COUCHSURFING * 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1DumonlDwI0




I chose this video because Couchsurfing has a great affect in my life.I discovered CS from an American boy who came my city when I was talking with him a cafe.I advice to all my friends to use Couchsurfing. CouchSurfing International Inc. is a corporation based in San Francisco that offer its users hospitality exchange and social networking services. Today a lot of people travel or host thanks to Couchsurfing In this video people answer that What CS means for them. Someone says that CS is a big experıence , other says it is a international connection , another says that it is learnıng lot of things or being a language lesson or meeting new people and fun. and I love Couchsurfing because I enjoy being able to immerse myself in the worlds of others, as this enables all of us to benefit from each others' shared novelties and broaden our horizons.
  Couchsurfing is truly traveling--not tourism. It is truly a beautiful experiment. After CS ,I learnt what about finding nice people everywhere and sharing nice experiences while traveling, learning from different cultures, traditions and languages in my hometown or while hosting. Not only have I had some absolutely amazing hosting experiences, but I have made countless life-long friends in every corner of the globe.I have a lot of different friends froM different countries like from USA,Polonia,France,Slovenia,Canada,Italy.etc. In the video we can see CouchSurfer's referance. I host appromaxıly 20-25 people and I use CS since 2010 summer. My mission is to share,to help, to meet, to discover all over the world. I love Couchsurfing ! :)

Exercise 1
We have a beagle that loves to hunt and we open he back door for her. She barrels down porch steps into the yard and runs back, forth across the lawn in ecstasy. ,Her nose cruises the wet grass for smells of cat,rabbit smells ,and other presences too subtle for human detection. While she sniffs, she spins her tail in quick circles. Firstly, It spins clokwise ,later spins counterclockwise.It always do these activities at the same times. We seem to propel her along.

Exercise 2
The Government Printing Office in Washington D.C. is a source of much useful information There arent many people who know this. İt is the official publishing house of the federal government.The GPO publishes pamphlets and books on a large number of subjects which range from the dangers of X-rays from home TV sets to the identification of mushrooms. About 27000 publications many of which are cheap and some of which are free offered through the Superintendent of Documents.

Exercise 3
The man who reaped America’s first fortune was John Jacob Astor. Astor, German immigrant, made his initial money trading Indian furs. He was lowborn and illererate. Aster never learned to speak English properly so he carried on his business to the end in an accent which was redolent of the Hamburg gutters.

SENTENCES WITH ERRORS
ERROR CATEGORY / CATEGORIES
NAME/DESCRIPTION OF ERROR
CORRECTION
The other point, maybe for most of us it is a problem, is being have to live without family.
Local errors
And global errors
Incorrect verb tense,
The other point which is probably a problem for most of us is having to live without family.
Metu is worth to deal with problems with which we can come accros in Metu.
Local errors

Incorrect formation of dependent clause and
Wrong preposition

Metu is worth dealing with the problems we can come across.
What I want to tell is that our curriculum should be easier than that of we have now.
Local errors
Global errors

Incorrect use of the preposition ‘of’ and incorrect use of  relative clause.
What ı want to tell is that our curriculum should be easier than this one we have now.
The most important thing is student can get the best knowladge  in here.
Global errors
Local errors
The missing word ‘that’ and the missing article
The most important thing is that a student can get the best knowledge in here.
Before I came to Metu, I had had some prejudices about it. If I could succeed, adapt, live alone and so on.
Global errors

Conditional sentence erro
Before I came to Metu, I had had some prejudices about whether I could succeed, adapt, live alone and so on
Anymore my mother isn't with me.
Global errors
Incorrect sentence structure
My mother isn’t with me anymore.
İ wanted to have more friends from different countries because by this way i  would be able to learn about different cultures.
Local errors
Other errors
Incorrect use of preposition ‘by’.
Lack of comma.
I wanted to have more friends from different countries because in this way,I would be able to learn about different cultures.
This prepare us to real life.
Global errors
Local errors
Verb incorrectly formed.
Incorrect use of the preposition ‘to’.
This prepare us for real life.
Each fields such as music, sport, education, dancing have a group.

Local errors

Subject verb error

Each fields such as music, sport, education, dancing have a group.
At METU, we have to do our works ourselves without any help most of  time
Local errors
Missing preposition

At METU,we have to do our works by ourselves/on our own without any help for most of time.
My roommates don't speak with each other.Each one is busy with her.
Local errors

Incorrect word choice
Incorrect use of proposition ‘with’
My roommate don’t speak to eachother.Each one is busy with themselves/their affairs.

12 Aralık 2011 Pazartesi

FROM HIGH SCHOOL TO COLLEGE This is my freshman year and I ll more different than high scholl .I dont have to go to class all the time but I ll do my best about it. There are most responsibilities like studying more, managing time..etc. Homesickness is one of y problems.I miss my parents , sister, brother so much.Sometimes ,I make up an excuse for cry.Keeping myself busy,making new friends , shopping talking with a counselor are good ideas to deal with homesickness.I m a self-confident person and this can help me at my academic and social life.I m both achievement oriented student who wants to get good grades and sometimes deep student who is excited by leraning.Passive students focus on details but I m not ğassive , sometimes I do this.I try to use my study time effectively.About lonelines,I can say that I m not alone.Meeting new people , making new friendship arent very hard for me.I dont think college life ll be so hard for me than high school.

9 Aralık 2011 Cuma

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1DumonlDwI0 I chose this video because Couchsurfing has a great affect in my life.I discovered CS from an American boy who came my city when I was talking with him a cafe.I advice to all my friends to use Couchsurfing. CouchSurfing International Inc. is a corporation based in San Francisco that offer its users hospitality exchange and social networking services. Today a lot of people travel or host thanks to Couchsurfing In this video people answer that What CS means for them. Someone says that CS is a big experıence , other says it is a international connection , another says that it is learnıng lot of things or being a language lesson or meeting new people and fun. and I love Couchsurfing because I enjoy being able to immerse myself in the worlds of others, as this enables all of us to benefit from each others' shared novelties and broaden our horizons. Couchsurfing is truly traveling--not tourism. It is truly a beautiful experiment. After CS ,I learnt what about finding nice people everywhere and sharing nice experiences while traveling, learning from different cultures, traditions and languages in my hometown or while hosting. Not only have I had some absolutely amazing hosting experiences, but I have made countless life-long friends in every corner of the globe.I have a lot of different friends froM different countries like from USA,Polonia,France,Slovenia,Canada,Italy.etc. In the video we can see CouchSurfer's referance. I host appromaxıly 20-25 people and I use CS since 2010 summer. My mission is to share,to help, to meet, to discover all over the world. I love Couchsurfing ! :)